Date: 2011-06-27 02:35 am (UTC)
This is a wonderful piece of writing. The plot is engaging, the conflict is moving, and the ending leaves room for another beginning, which is the best part, really. I also really like the way you characterized Yamamoto and Gokudera. Actually, I don't read very many fics with Yamamoto as a player (possibly because his character doesn't seem like the type?), but the situation in the story is believable and interesting. My absolute favorite lines of the story are: It was sweet music to his ears. and Gokudera nodded. “Right.” The lighter finally started to work. because so much is said in so little words, and brings us so much closer to both character. ♥

Anyway, enough of my rambling. Absolutely gorgeous fic. Thanks for sharing, I completely enjoyed it. :')
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